A Personal Matter-manga 1

Here's page one of the manga adaptation of A Personal Matter by Kenzaburo Oë. On purpose, it is to be read like a japanese manga, from right to left.

This entire project was done in less than one day. I WAS NOT TRYING TO MAKE THIS LOOK FANTASTIC. If I was to do a real comic, it would look FAR better than this would.

This is, in a way, my first comic. But again, I DID not work hard on this, so I would prefer not to hear any critiques. This is not a great piece of work, and anything you have to say about it (error wise) I probably already know.

I don't mean to be rude at all, if I am. I just strongly suggest no critiques until I post something that I actually worked hard on.

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